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 Caitlin is my Vocaloid!

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PostSubject: Caitlin is my Vocaloid!   Caitlin is my Vocaloid! Icon_minitimeSat Feb 26, 2011 1:39 pm

Name: Caitlin
Age: 10
Gender: Female
Type: Utauloid
Character Item/Food: A rabbit toy
Hobbies: Reading, singing, making jokes in her head, and playing piano. (She usually figures out how to play anime songs)
Appearance: Black and silky hair, long and wavy. Wears a black shirt. Sweat pants that are black. Black sandels Here is a pic I made. [url=Click here!]http://dreamself.me/d/cgFo
Personality: Kind, but a little aggressive when upset. She doesn't mind being pushed around, unless it harms someone important to her, usually emotionally.
Likes: Animals, friends, family, vocaloid.
Dislikes: Bullies, peanuts, pink, guns, knives, heights.


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PostSubject: Re: Caitlin is my Vocaloid!   Caitlin is my Vocaloid! Icon_minitimeSat Feb 26, 2011 1:54 pm

Welcome to the site.
Your utauloid has some things wrong.

First off, hobbies. Reading I'm okay with, but sitting and breathing and that other stuff, I will not tolerate. Please understand to take this seriously.
Second, likes and dislikes. You can't say etc. When I think of etc., I think of all sorts of things. I could think that she dislikes Christmas and that she likes robbers. So fix that too.

Now this comment is a recomendation. Can you make your character more Utauloidy. I just see a normal girl.
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PostSubject: Re: Caitlin is my Vocaloid!   Caitlin is my Vocaloid! Icon_minitimeSat Feb 26, 2011 2:00 pm

Better?
Sorry about that.
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PostSubject: Re: Caitlin is my Vocaloid!   Caitlin is my Vocaloid! Icon_minitimeSat Feb 26, 2011 2:06 pm

did you even read what I wrote?

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Second, likes and dislikes. You can't say etc. When I think of etc., I think of all sorts of things. I could think that she dislikes Christmas and that she likes robbers. So fix that too.

and I just realize. Your title says "Caitlin my vocaloid" But Caitlin's a utau
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PostSubject: Re: Caitlin is my Vocaloid!   Caitlin is my Vocaloid! Icon_minitimeSat Feb 26, 2011 2:08 pm

Yes, I did read it.
Sorry, I forgot that Caitlin was a Utau.
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PostSubject: Re: Caitlin is my Vocaloid!   Caitlin is my Vocaloid! Icon_minitimeSat Feb 26, 2011 2:16 pm

approved but read carefully.
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